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Having the bubbles move separately from each other is excellent. My only note would be about the frames of animation when he is inhaling; since his mouth isn't open and the only movement is the line on his cheek the animation for that seems a bit flat. I think if you have his head move/tilt back while he is inhaling then go back to regular position while he is exhaling it would definitely add more impact. Also you might add a bit of highlights on his cheek as he is inhaling. A little pink and a slight increase in the timing at the end of the inhale might be cute. That part is really up to you.
Overall this icon is very well done.